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Monday, 16 July 2012

Hookers & Hangers Blogfest: Hookers

It's time for the Hookers & Hangers bloghop, hosted by the ladies at Falling For Fiction. The deal is to post as many first lines and last lines from chapters of your WIP as you can: Hookers today, Hangers on Wednesday.


I just completed my WIP first draft, The Memory Cell, last week and tried to get all my hookers ready for action (!) over the weekend, as I don't write in chapters, but with one thing and another... didn't happen. I've got nine for you, which is about a third of the book. But hey, that gives you more time to check out all the other great entries!

So, here we go...


Chapter 1: She had been feeling pretty good about herself that day, until it happened.

Chapter 2: The first thing she saw when she woke up was Michael lying twisted on the road.

Chapter 3: On the Saturday, Helen got up, dressed in her casual gear as she had since Tuesday, and arrived at the bedside at the normal time.

Chapter 4: Helen stayed with Michael on the Saturday night.

Chapter 5: On Monday morning, Julie Hanbury sat up in bed and, as she had done every day for the past week, opened up her laptop to trawl for any more news.

Chapter 6: He slept for a long time in the morning.

Chapter 7: When Michael was dressed in his new clothes, Helen helped him to walk out of the ward with the holdall over her shoulder.

Chapter 8: She awoke two hours later to find Michael staring at her owlishly.

Chapter 9: Julie was stuck.

Don't forget to check out the linky list to visit all the other participants!

62 comments:

  1. Curious what the story is about now!

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  2. The second line struck a cord in me. Very vivid.

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  3. I related to the hooker for Chapter 2, but the rest are good! I am left wondering where this story is going to go.

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  4. I want to know what 'happened' in chapter one. Intriguing!

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  5. That chapter 2 opening makes me wonder what's going on. It's the best a good set.

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  6. Wow! The first two are AWESOME!!!

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  7. I absolutely love the first one, and the start of Chapter 5 - both really gripped me! And I really want to know what is going on in Chapter 9!

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  8. 1,2,5,8, and 9 really got me curious and interested. Nice post!

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  9. Awesome hookers! I'm wishing I could live chapter 6 right now. If I sleep past 7 it's a good day, lol.

    Can't wait to see your hangers!

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  10. Great job! I'm so curious about this story :) The hookers and very hooking :)

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  11. I really like those, especially the first and last ones. I'm curious about the story!

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  12. Hi Nick, I love the second, seventh and the eight ones a lot.

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  13. What a great bloghop. Thanks for sharing your hooks. My favorites are 1, 2, & 8.

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  14. Chapter 2 really has me curious, it's so sad. Great job! Can't wait to read your hangers.

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  15. Ooh - love the second one. Very intriguing!

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  16. Love 'em! But Ch2 is killing me! I must know more!

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  17. Holy Krakatoa, Ch2! I want to know what's going on there.

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  18. Oh, this is fun! I wish I hadn't missed participating in this. That second line of yours is an intriguing doozy.

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  19. Suze - Fun and a bit scary. ;)

    Alex - Thanks! Good to hear.

    Danielle - Thanks very much.

    Carolyn - It's quite interesting to read these lines out of context. Glad to hear you're interested!

    Stina - I'm not sure whether that line should include more detail. Funny to think I wrote it over two years ago!

    Martin - Thanks! Glad you liked it.

    Lisa - Thanks! :D

    Kyra - I guess you want to hear more from Julie! Your wish is granted as I've sent you 7-9 now. :)

    Tyrean - Thanks!

    Summer - It does seem to be the one - now to make them all as good!

    Cassie - Thanks! Lol, 7 is a lie in for me.

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  20. Chapter two completely intrigued me! Great job.

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  21. Emily - Thanks! I'd like to have had more ready.

    Hope - Thanks, lol. :)

    Tobi - Thank you! Nice to hear.

    Mara, Rachna, Prerna, Ruth - Thanks! :D

    Jenny, Kimberly, Leigh, Rena, Shannon, Tasha - OK, it looks like I have some work to do to make everything as good as Ch 2. Thanks for the input, everyone! :)

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  23. What a great blogfest!
    I especially like Chapter 2's hooker. Wow! I mean, wow!

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  24. 2 and 9 especially grab me!

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  25. You don't write in chapters?? Interesting... I love hearing about what works for writers. :)

    And I really love number two. Such great description. Thanks for participating!

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  26. Chapter 2 is definitely my favourite - totally intriguing. You really get a sense of some of the struggles going on just from these first lines. good work :)
    Nari X

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  27. Your hookers are doing their job very well.

    #2 is my fave.

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  28. Awesome hookers. I liked number 8. 'owlishly' is a great word - invokes a lot of imagery. :)

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  29. Staring owlishly is freaky!! :)

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  30. Great opening! And I agree with the above comments - the word "owlishly" jumped out at me - awesome :)

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  31. Ohh nice opening line for chp 1. You've got me hooked. All the lines are great.

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  32. Very interesting hooks, I'm intrigued as to what happened to Michael.

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  33. They're all good and have me curious to know more.

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  34. Sounds like a fun blogfest! You've some great ones, but my favorite is the second one.

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  35. Staring owlishly - that is a great word.

    #1 made me laugh.

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  36. Great posting and nice hookers. Definitely #2 leaves me intrigued. Can't wait for the hangers. Enjoyed reading.

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  37. #2 made me raise my eyebrows, I wanna know what's going on! Great job :)

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  38. Don't worry - mine weren't ready either, which is why I only posted three. :D Great job with this. They're great!

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  39. Totally hate it when #1 happens. When bad things happen there should be foreboding like in books, well until your book when the bad thing happened on a good day. Left me thinking...and that means I'm hooked!

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  40. Ooo, I wonder what happened from chapter 1. I also like "Julie was stuck."

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  41. curious relationship! great hooks!

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  42. Susan - Thanks very much! :)

    VikLit - Thanks! Glad you liked them.

    Kelley - I tend to just think in scenes. You're welcome! It was fun and can't wait for tomorrow!

    Nari - Thanks for the perceptive comment! :)

    Jay - Glad to hear it. ;)

    Jade - Thanks! I wasn't sure as it is a dreaded adverb.

    DL, Kim - Thanks! I do think it's a good word too!

    TF - Thanks! Glad you were hooked. :)

    Clare - Thanks. There were definitely loads of intriguing hookers in the fest!

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  43. Mina - Thanks! That is nice to read. :D

    Kathy, Amanda - Thank you!

    Suzi - Thanks. Owlishly seems to have a few fans!

    Gossip_Grl - Thanks! I'm looking forward to seeing what everyone makes of the hangers.

    J.A. - Thanks! Eyebrows raised is a good sign!

    Amy - Thanks! :)

    Elizabeth - Thanks! I like your reaction. :)

    Cherie - Thanks!

    Tara - Thanks! Well, I can say it's an unusual relationship.

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  44. Lines like #9 always make my curious... literal or figurative?

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  45. What an interesting process. Your sentences are very interesting and I love how they seem to tell a little story in and of themselves.

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  46. The second one is definitely a hooker. Excellent choice of words, sentence structure. Good job.

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  47. 1000th Monkey - Thanks! I hadn't thought of it that way. (It was figurative.)

    C.B. - Thanks. That's very nice of you to say so!

    Lynn(e) - Thanks! Your comment made me smile! :)

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  48. I want to know more, so these must be great hookers!

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  49. My fave is #2 - like woah! how did that happen? What'll happen next? Yeah, nice hanger!

    Can't believe you have a character called Julie Hanbury - I know a woman with that name :D

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  50. Oh wow! I am intrigued.

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  51. Made me wonder who these people were. Good job.

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  52. Twisted on the ground? How sad...and intriguing!

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  53. Ch. 2 is my favorite definitely.

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  54. Ink in the Book - Thanks! :)

    Trisha - Thanks! That's pretty bizarre. I'd never even heard that name before. I just made it up! :/

    Madeleine - Thanks! I'm glad. :)

    Clee - Thanks. Nice to hear that. :)

    Deana, Robin - Thanks. Two CPs have said that should be Chapter 1!

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  55. My favs are 1, 2, 8, and 9 but really they are all good. I can't wait to read your book!

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  56. Thanks! I wish you could've taken part because I can't wait to read yours, too!! :D

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