Hedgeson
loved playing gravball. The feeling of freedom he got from being able to run
across the walls and ceiling of the pitch – each of which had its own gravity
field installed – was like nothing else. He was aware that the rest of his life
– going to school, even mealtimes thanks to the preset times on the food
dispenser – was regimented, and that was the way he liked it. Everything in its
proper place. His friends and teammates felt the same, embracing the status
quo. That was, except for Wellesbury, their captain. He couldn’t exactly put
his finger on it, but this gifted player always gave the impression of being
somewhere else in his mind. On the pitch, he was totally in the zone, but off it…
some of the things he said gave Hedgeson pause. He’d snap out of it, hopefully.
Everyone knew that questioning things wasn’t a good idea.
Hedgeson sounds like a noticing sort, even if he doesn't like questioning the status quo - where's that going to lead him, I wonder?
ReplyDeleteSophie
Sophie's Thoughts & Fumbles - Dragon Diaries
Wow! Intimidating military -like regime . Look forward to reading your book, Nick.
ReplyDeleteBest wishes
Moon
https://aslifehappens60.wordpress.com
Hi Nick - ah - Wellesbury ... the one to watch - which Hedgeson was obviously good at given his ability to be many places ... interesting .. cheers Hilary
ReplyDeletehttp://positiveletters.blogspot.co.uk/2017/04/h-is-for-horse.html
Yeah, questioning does tend to ruin everything,doesn't it? Scary place!
ReplyDeleteNilanjana
Madly-in-Verse
Sounds like his perfect world is about to come to an abrupt end... Happy A-to-Z-ing.
ReplyDeleteNick,
ReplyDeleteOh, I'd find it awful difficult to live in a world where questioning wasn't a good thing. I'd be branded a trouble maker for sure! While your book is fiction, I know there are people like this and that's really scary. Hedgeson's character is interesting! Thanks for visiting over the weekend. I'm a bit late but finally made it. Have a good week ahead and happy a2zing!
~Curious as a Cathy
#AprilA2Z Art Sketching Through the Alphabet Letter "H" + #4M
Ask no questions, you'll be told no lies. Don't quite know why I said that, but it was the first thing that came into my mind!
ReplyDeleteAmble Bay's Village Hall!
Glad at least this wasn't regimented. Sounds like a scary world.
ReplyDeleteHedgeson sounds like the sort who could be trouble or could be in for a rude awakening.
ReplyDeleteTasha
Tasha's Thinkings - Shapeshifters and Werewolves
Chilling. Well done.
ReplyDeletehttp://darlamsands.blogspot.com/
Gravball sounds like a game I'd enjoy playing! :D
ReplyDeleteThe Multicolored Diary: WTF - Weird Things in Folktales
What a great idea for the challenge, Nick. I'm enjoying reading these snippets!
ReplyDeleteVery interesting snippet! Makes me want to know more about this world that he lives in.
ReplyDeleteI suspect the little taste of freedom he gets from grayball will become something he increasingly craves in other areas of life.
ReplyDeletehttps://laurelgarver.blogspot.com/2017/04/h-happiness.html
Man gravball reminds me of that underwater soccer/basketball game from Final Fantasy 10. God I wasted so much time playing that stupid game.
ReplyDeleteInteresting world you've got going there, Nick. I look forward to more!
ReplyDeleteSounds like Wellesbury is my kind of character. I hope he doesn't get anyone else in trouble for all his troubling comments...though that makes for a great story.
ReplyDeleteDiscarded Darlings - Jean Davis, Speculative Fiction Writer, A to Z: Editing Fiction
Caught up, all interesting characters. Love the way you're doing this!
ReplyDeleteThat sounds like a fun sport. But I'm not liking this world they live in one bit.
ReplyDeleteOMG, lemme play some gravball!
ReplyDeleteLove the excerpt, makes me want to read more!
ReplyDeleteDamyanti
Gravball sounds interesting.
ReplyDeleteSo does Wellesbury. People pushing the status quo is always a good thing.
Anna
I know someone like Hedgeson in real life. he is not a very liked person in the team though
ReplyDeleteA Peice Of My Life
That's a quite unique sport!
ReplyDeleteThis installment makes me shudder. I'm not a fan of going along with the status-quo. Make some waves! ;)
ReplyDelete~Patricia Lynne aka Patricia Josephine~
Story Dam
Patricia Lynne, Indie Author
But will the freedom he experiences while playing gravball last?
ReplyDeleteGround for a great story here. I can sense the conflict ;-)
ReplyDelete@JazzFeathers
The Old Shelter - 1940s Film Noir