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Thursday, 11 April 2013

An A-Z Story - J


Just in time with this post today. Sorry I'm running so late; most members of my family are laid up with nasty bugs and infections. I took my stepdaughter to the doctor this morning, and also had to take the two youngest ones to get their eyes tested, which took up quite a large part of the day.

My theme is as follows: each day I will ask for words beginning with that day's letter, which I will randomly select five from to use in a sentence in an ongoing story. That sentence will be posted the next day when I'll ask for words for the next letter. So my Z sentence will appear on May 1st.

Thank you for the 222 juicy I words yesterday (and today!) These are the five that random.org judiciously chose.

Illicit (suggested by Madeline Mora-Summonte)
Interrupt (suggested by Bish Denham)
Illogical (suggested by Jackie)
Island (suggested by Nicole Rivera)
Iridescent (suggested by Medeia Sharif)

I couldn't resist adding a few more in the sentence too! So now we have:


Angels had always had a certain ambiguity, being both human and divine, reflected Acatour with an acute sense of malaise as he looked down on the arable fields of medieval England. A bird flew past making a belligerent shriek, unnerved it seemed by a boggart; Acatour descended, thinking it would take a brainiac like him to unravel the poor soul’s beginnings and why it had not reached Heaven.
     York Cathedral hove into view, shrouded in wooden scaffold as part of the local bishop’s campaign of restoration; but before he could challenge a carpenter over whether any of his colleagues had fallen to their doom, his presence was announced by the crawdad he’d eaten back in 20th century New Orleans repeating on him. He wiped dribble from his chin as the remains of the crustacean narrowly missed the workmen to land in the dew of the graveyard, berating himself for his debauched and unangelic behaviour the previous night; why did that dame have to desert him? The effervescent Ella had always been eager for exciting adventures, but when he’d asked her to accompany him on this esoteric time travel mission, she’d called him a crazy drunk and left.
     It did sound rather fabulous, in the true sense of the word, he thought to himself as he descended further before landing on an empty area of scaffold, all the better for making himself visible; next to him was some viscous fluid, making him think that any fall from this precarious structure would surely be a fluke. Stepping away from the gel-like substance, he felt something watching him and turned to see a Gardengoyle on the wall next to a carved bunch of grapes, which caused the gregarious sounds of the workmen to die away as two thoughts rang clearly in his head: what was it doing here, and did he detect guilt in the creature’s eyes?
     That horrendous stare was starting to give Acatour a headache when a workman with a harried expression shimmied up onto the platform via a hemp rope, his arrival causing an apparently hilarious reaction in the Gardengoyle. “Hey, you!” said the workman, stomping towards Acatour, but something seemed to interrupt his progress, drawing him inexorably towards the island of iridescent liquid, which seemed entirely illogical to the angel until he sensed the impish carving’s illicit intentions.

Show me the cut of your jib with your J words! You can offer as many as you like, and they can be as obscure and outlandish as you like (feel free to use a dictionary for inspiration). The more words you suggest, the more chance you have of one being picked. It doesn't matter if you suggest the same word as someone else (as I know not everyone always has time to read all the comments); each will count as its own entry. And come back tomorrow to see if you made my newest run-on sentence. Seriously, I'm enjoying it - just know that I don't normally write them so long!

29 comments:

  1. J already? June. Jolly. Jeepers. Jot. Jog

    That's all I've got!

    Here's to keeping up the good AtoZ work while juggling all the family you have.

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  2. jackdaw, jackanape, jack-of-all-trades, Jehoshaphat

    ~MPL
    http://pepperwords.com

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  3. This story is really cool!
    Juicy, jacked, jerk.

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  4. Hey, Nick,
    Hope the family recovers soon.
    Good going so far with the story.

    Jabber
    Julienne
    Jitterbug

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  5. juicy
    joke
    jabber
    jungle
    junk
    jolly
    jetty
    jet
    jalopy
    joyous
    jiffy

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  6. Hope all are feeling better soon!

    jealous
    jepordy
    junk
    jamboree
    jumbo

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  7. Really great post.

    John
    Jack
    Jason
    Josh
    Jose
    Jane
    Julia
    Johanna

    (Sorry for all the names!)

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  8. Keep going Nick. Hope the family are soon feeling better.
    Jungle
    Juice
    Jingle
    Jelly
    Juggle

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  9. The plot thickens....

    Jewel
    Jem (ie: the cartoon character with pink hair)
    Julia (uh, had to add my name in just for the heck of it)
    Jade
    Jadeite
    Jasper

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  10. Here's my suggestions
    Joie d vivre
    Jamboree
    Jaded
    Jilted
    Justice

    Happy Writing!

    Writer In Transit

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  11. Jack
    Jill
    Jumping jacks
    jolly
    jinx
    jade
    joy
    junk
    jail
    joke

    :D YOU rock!

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  12. Yay! This is fun!

    Jinn
    Joust
    Jumble
    Jaunt
    Jest

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  13. Wow. you've got a bunch of J words to choose from. Not sure if anyone already suggested this but how about,
    Jambalaya.

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  14. Yay, my word was chosen.

    Janitor, jocose, jerky, jumbo, jovial.

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  15. jovial
    jinxed
    jewelry
    joke
    jaundice
    jack-o-lantern
    jumping jacks
    Judas
    jubilant

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  16. Thanks for all these suggestions so far - lovely, er, jubly! :D

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  17. wow, everybody already suggested anything I could think of. Good luck with some of those words.

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  18. Looks great, Nick

    Jepardy
    Juniper
    Justification
    Jack the Ripper
    Juno

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  19. This is crazy fun! I'll add:
    jodhpurs
    jetty
    jacaranda
    jelly beans

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  20. Jolly jazzed June-bugs!

    Great idea! Love it.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog yesterday!

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  21. Great story so far! Keep up the good work!

    J - jive, jibe, jump, joyous

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  22. I think you are doing such a great job with the punctuation that you aren't writing run-ons at all. Loving the story so far.

    jerry-rigged
    jointed
    juxtapose
    junction
    jammin'
    jars
    jack-o-lantern
    jimmy
    jogged

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  23. Oh, "iridescent" is such a great word--glad to see that got picked!

    jester
    jolly
    jog
    jet
    journey
    jewelry
    jock
    jingle
    jaded
    jaundiced
    joke

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  24. Thanks again everyone! Just about to choose today's words...

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  25. Oh no, I am too late. I will try to be earlier tomorrow. :)

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  26. I also got here late. Your story is really taking off. Hope everyone is feeling better soon.

    Julie

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  27. Such a cool idea!
    Jailer
    Janitor
    Junebug
    Jiffy
    Java

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  28. Jaded
    jinx
    jabberwocky
    joint
    jilted

    :-)

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